Home-based Business has flexibility because it's based on home. People has less risk and can start business with small money. Its size is depends on you. It can rely on workers from outside the company to do the work or supply the things. Also, it has some drawbacks. Due to its location, it is hard for customers to approach to company and there are lots of disturbance in home.
Running home based business has some advantages, such as less risk, lower startup costs, outsourcing and that you can make your own home-based business which suits all your situations. It ,On the other hand, has some disadvantages. One of them is restriction in shipping activities. The other thing is conflict between working at home and your other domestic commitment. And the last one is that an environment capable of attracting customers is not proper
This is OK, but really hard to read because of grammar errors. Also, after reading it several times, it is not clear to me that this business is actually run from a person's home. You have made it seem that this is some "special" space somewhere that is unusual.
JongHyo: This is good in terms of word choice and clearness, even though there are grammar, capitalization, and punctuation mistakes.
Editted: Running a home based business has some advantages, such as less risk, lower startup costs, outsourcing. A home-based business can also suit all variables of a person's situation. Disadvantages include restrictions on shipping activities. Another conflict arises when working at home and your other domestic commitment interfere. The home environment is also not good at attracting customers.
Thank you for correcting my summary. I think i can improve my Enlish better and better through your right points. Sometimes I won`t live up to your expectation. Please do not be disappointed in me then.
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Home-based Business has flexibility because it's based on home. People has less risk and can start business with small money. Its size is depends on you. It can rely on workers from outside the company to do the work or supply the things. Also, it has some drawbacks. Due to its location, it is hard for customers to approach to company and there are lots of disturbance in home.
Running home based business has some advantages, such as less risk, lower startup costs, outsourcing and that you can make your own home-based business which suits all your situations.
It ,On the other hand, has some disadvantages. One of them is restriction in shipping activities. The other thing is conflict between working at home and your other domestic commitment. And the last one is that an environment capable of attracting customers is not proper
Soyean:
The first sentence provides no real info.
Plurals, subject verb agreement, quantitative descriptors (small), pronoun referents.
This is OK, but really hard to read because of grammar errors. Also, after reading it several times, it is not clear to me that this business is actually run from a person's home. You have made it seem that this is some "special" space somewhere that is unusual.
JongHyo:
This is good in terms of word choice and clearness, even though there are grammar, capitalization, and punctuation mistakes.
Editted:
Running a home based business has some advantages, such as less risk, lower startup costs, outsourcing. A home-based business can also suit all variables of a person's situation. Disadvantages include restrictions on shipping activities. Another conflict arises when working at home and your other domestic commitment interfere. The home environment is also not good at attracting customers.
Maria
Dear Maria
Thank you for correcting my summary.
I think i can improve my Enlish
better and better through your right points.
Sometimes I won`t live up to your expectation. Please do not be disappointed in me then.
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