Benetech is the company that connects the social sector with business and technology leaders. Business model of Benetech is to sustain technology solutions for social needs with focus on "Return on Humanity". In this company these three things, need, technology and sustainability is considered to be important. Rather than making the maximum financial return, there primary goal is helping all of humanity.
As a good example of nonprofit business model which the most focuses on ROH(reture on humanity) there are three factors considered to be important. These are need, technology and sustainability. This works with many other people from all over the world to make what they work for happen. I love these people's mutual efforts and the thing their purpose is to help people rather than making a big profit.
Songeun: This is really good. While the overall grammatical approach is advanced, your implementation of it has a few mistakes? Can you find them? (Articles, subject/verb agreement)
JeongSun: Who is this? What is the "work" that they do? Your summary is too general and needs further explanation. I understand about their business model, but I don't understand their business. Also, this is a summarization exercise and should not include your opinion. (Or you need to "mask" it by your word choice - something we can discuss later in our classes.)
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Benetech is the company that connects the social sector with business and technology leaders. Business model of Benetech is to sustain technology solutions for social needs with focus on "Return on Humanity". In this company these three things, need, technology and sustainability is considered to be important. Rather than making the maximum financial return, there primary goal is helping all of humanity.
As a good example of nonprofit business model which the most focuses on ROH(reture on humanity) there are three factors considered to be important. These are need, technology and sustainability. This works with many other people from all over the world to make what they work for happen. I love these people's mutual efforts and the thing their purpose is to help people rather than making a big profit.
Songeun:
This is really good. While the overall grammatical approach is advanced, your implementation of it has a few mistakes? Can you find them? (Articles, subject/verb agreement)
JeongSun:
Who is this? What is the "work" that they do? Your summary is too general and needs further explanation. I understand about their business model, but I don't understand their business. Also, this is a summarization exercise and should not include your opinion. (Or you need to "mask" it by your word choice - something we can discuss later in our classes.)
Great job.
Maria
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