A brick and mortar is a business that physical salers sell physical goods off line. Through this business, a businessman can have opportunities to meet with consumers in person. It provides people with dedicated spaces, so that they can go to work. But, to run this business, people have to be resigned to burdens for startup costs and lease. Devotional efforts are needed now.
A Brick-and-Mortar is a typical business with a physical facility that is operated with off-line process. It provides more chances to contact with people and makes more employment. Yet it also has high risk bearing, costs, time, and employees to get the facility ready for business.
3 comments:
A brick and mortar is a business that physical salers sell physical goods off line. Through this business, a businessman can have opportunities to meet with consumers in person. It provides people with dedicated spaces, so that they can go to work. But, to run this business, people have to be resigned to burdens for startup costs and lease. Devotional efforts are needed now.
A Brick-and-Mortar is a typical business with a physical facility that is operated with off-line process. It provides more chances to contact with people and makes more employment. Yet it also has high risk bearing, costs, time, and employees to get the facility ready for business.
Gye Hyeong:
This is good overall.
salers - not a word
Don't understand your last sentence or how it relates to the summary.
Bee Ho:
This is really good, but a few mistakes in grammar.
You like "with" but it is not always needed.
"with off-line" just drop "with."
"contact with people" - "contact people"
Don't really understand how it "makes more employment." What do you mean?
Your list in the last sentence uses different forms:
high risk bearing (adj), costs(n), time (n), and employees (n)
Use all adjectives, all nouns, or all verbs for listing.
Maria
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